The Murder: Part One Of The Three Little Pigs.

“Two greedy, aggressive, lazy pigs, just moved in next door, honey”, said my wife. “And, why do I care again?”, replied the wolf. “I would like for you to go and make some friends. You haven’t been out ever since we got married! Now, please get out of here!”, yelled his wife.



Moaning and groaning, he eventually got outside in the warm and weak sunlight. He stood and gazed at the two little pigs. “Hey!” he shouted, “I am Wolfy, but my name is actually Mr Sweetie. I was wondering if you guys, umm I mean pigs, would like to have dinner?”





Within and instant, they replied, “YES!!!, WE’LL BE THERE”. After receiving such good news, the three little pigs stormed through the doors and got ready for tonight's feast. Finally...





...the bright bold moon rose from the East. Birds surrounded the edge of a cliff. Gray clouds gathered together, as the pouring rain stormed down onto Mr and Mrs Sweetie’s house.





‘Knock, Knock,’ tapped an anonymous, on the front door. In a deep voice they called, “Hello, is there anyone here?”. Quietly and quickly Mrs sweetie answered the door.





“AHHHHHHHHHHH!” she screamed. After 3 cold long hours, Mr sweetie dashed through the door. “Honey I’m home!” he yelled excitedly....but there was no answer. Again he called but still no answer.





Searching for his wife, he found her in the attic. Her limbs were detached apart from her body. So far apart from her body that her guts splattered out of her lower stomach.




With the blood of his love in his hands, he was determined to find who murdered his wife.

John Buying A Creative Picture. (Made Up Story)

The moment John saw the picture, he was suprised of how creative the picture was. This picture has really cool patterns. I haven’t seen these patterns before. Someone drew Monalisa on this picture and it looks realistic and it actually goes with the patterns. So he looked for a while and this lady came and said “Hi! How can I help you?”. 

“Yes how much is for this picture here?” John said excitedly.


“It is $100” The lady replied.


Well the lady was right its expensive because those patterns no one seen before and someone actually drew Monalisa.


“Ok! I’ll come back!” John said crossly.


So John went home crossly because he didn’t have enough money to buy this creative picture.



John actually didn’t go home. He went into his car and opened up his wallet. He only had $70. So John was thinking and thinking. Five minutes from that moment he turned on his car and he went. He went to his sister’s house Alice. Walking up to the door John was nervous because he know his sister doesn’t give him money. So John Knocked on the door and Alice opened the door with an big smile.



“Hi Alice, I just came by to ask if you had $30?” John asked slowly.
“Whats $30 for?” Alice answered.


“Its for this really creative picture, it has Monalisa on it that someone actually drew (Alice loves Monalisa) it also has patterns that no one seen before!” John said rushly.


“Well you know I love Monalisa..... OK! Here you go” Alice said while she was giving John $30.


“Thank you sis!!” John excitedly replied.


John quickly rushed back to the store. They were getting ready to close the store but John ran so fast they let him in. John ran and grapped the picture and went to the same lady that came to him earlier and gave the money to her. When he got back home he hanged the picture up on the wall! “What a day it was!!” John whispered to himself.

My Holidays!

Well I guess my holidays were not cool at all. Every day I would just stay home doing chores. I hate doing chores! Any ways the first week of holidays was maybe a chores week. The last week of holidays was the best week ever. On Wednesday My cousin’s and I went to the sky tower. We just went because it was so boring staying home.

As soon as we got to the sky tower we hopped off and went up the elevator. Getting off the elevator I was so excited. We went down the escalator and met with some of my cousin’s work mates. After talking with my cousin’s work mates we went up to the last level of the sky tower. The last level is level 60! I told my cousin’s that level 60 was the last level but they didn’t believe me. I got very annoyed.

Anyways back to the last level. Getting off the elevator I was so happy. The last level is called “The Sky-Deck.” At the sky deck we had to do this activity but I didn’t want to do it because I was too lazy. Well after all that fun time at the sky deck we went back down to the main level and we got free ice blocks. That really cooled me down because it was really hot.

So it was time to go. I thought we were going to go back home but no we didn’t. We went to the KFC to have a feed. That feed was so nice and nice timing because I’d had no breakfast and I was so hungry. After our feed we went back home and when I got home I went for a nap.

Thank you Mr. Hutchings for proof-reading my work.

WILL.I.AM!

Wil.i.am Visit Room 14 from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

Well we had a really important assembly last week and there was a really important visitor coming. Mr Burt never told us who the special visitor was. I was like "Fine Then." So we practiced our Waiata (Song) while we were waiting for the special visitor.

After practicing our Waiata Mr Burt told us who the special visitor was. It was WILL.I.AM! I was like Oh My God!!!!! He is really famous, More famous than Titanium and Stan Walker! I am a really huge fan of WILL.I.AM! I love his songs Power and Scream & Shout!

I couldn't believe this was going to happen. So we were waiting and while we were waiting we watched some funny movies. Mr Burt stopped the second funny movie we watched and he got the micro phone and said WILL.I.AM is here. So I looked back and there he was walking in to the school breeze. Well WILL.I.AM came to give us a really special gift to us.

As he was walking in the hall I couldn't stop staring at him. He looked really cool in his cool clothes. Well he told us about his life first that he grew up with no dad which was really sad :(. He said that his dream was to take care of him mum. He also told us that he is going back to school in September this year to learn about computer science. He grew up in Los Angeles.

Thank you Mr. Hutchings for helping me proofread my work.

My Reflection For This Term! (:

WOW! What a term it has been. This term has been really cool. All the stuff we’ve been doing was awesome. Esspecially tech down at Tamaki College! Tech is when we do different things.

My highlight for this term is Fiafia. I like Fiafia because I get to stand in front with Mary.V and Vivienne! We get to stand in front because we are the main ones in our group. Anyways I’ve also enjoyed tech because I get to learn how to draw properly cause I’m in Graphics.

What I didn’t like this term is P.E! I didn’t like P.E because it was too tiring and it was always sunny on the days we did it. But next term I wish to play some games in the hall.

I have managed to do my work well (I think). I’ve put so much effort into my work especially the independent stuff and movies. Next term I wish to do better at listening to my group mates ideas and use it. I have got along with others very well. The only thing I need to improve in is my maths because I am always behind. I am sometimes shy to share my ideas with my group because they might not like it.

My goals for next term are keeping in touch with my work and listening carefully to instructions. I really wish to cooperate better next term and no arguing.

Assembly!

Going into the hall I could see alot of strange people wearing green Cook Island clothes. “Wow!” I thought to myself. So I searched around the hall to look for some Cook Island drums. “I think they are just wearing there clothes to show there Cook Island people” I whispered to myself. I searched and searched around and there it was on the stage.

As soon as we sat down Mr. Burt (our principal) Said “Etu Tatou.” That meant we had to stand up ready for the national anthem. Finishing off the anthem we moved onto duffy certificates. Mary Vaisima got the certificate for our class. “Yuss! I tought it would be me” I said to myself. If it was me I would be shy.

Finally that finished! After that Ms. Muliaumasealii (Aka Ms. M) Ran in saying “Milimilimili Patia  Patia.” Patia means 1 clap in Samoan. She told us Fiafia was coming and Fiafia is when every cultural does a traditional dance of theres and preform’s it in front of heaps of people. After that The Cook Island Group performed. They were really good!

The Day's Things Were Disappearing (Writing Sample)

On a really cold and windy day my mum and I went shopping. We went into the fruit shop and a strong wind nearly blew everything onto the floor. “WOW” I thought to myself. “What a strong wind” My mum whispered. We were looking for some vegetables for lunch.



I noticed something strange. Things were disappearing, the bananas, the apples even the Broccoli! I looked around me and my mum was gone. “Mum” I yelled. I heard no reply. So I yelled again “Mum!!” I still had no reply. I searched around and tried to find her but I couldn't.



Walking home a little worried, I realised that her car wasn't there. “That's strange” I said to myself. I carried on walking and went inside my house and I saw my dad sitting on the couch. “Have you seen mum?” I asked him.


“No I thought you were with her.” He answered back.

“Yes I was but she suddenly disappeared.”

“Well walk back to the shop and try and find her.” He glanced back.



I walked back to the shops and I found the fruit shop and there she was standing over by the pineapples. “Where did you suddenly disappear to?” I asked her.


“I went to the hair salon just to check out their new hairstyles.” She gently answered back.

“Well you got me worried” I said to her.

“Sorry darling” she said back.

“It’s ok, can we go home now?” I asked.

“Sure” she answered back. So off we went and when we got back home she made us a warm curry to eat. YUM!