In the holidays my family, my church members and I, went to Eastern Beach. When we first got there we sat on a mat and started eating. What we were eating was watermelon and some other healthy stuff. I was so full after I had eaten. After lunch I decided to go for a swim with my surf board! On the way getting into the water it was freezing cold. The beach we went to didn’t have many waves. I wish it had so that I could have stood up on my surf board and surfed! Well I cant surf. I could try next time.
Hi Asena,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading about your day at the beach. I like how you remembered to make your sentences interesting by starting them in different ways and adding details. I also like that you threw in some exclamations!!!
Hello Asena,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Samera Johnson and I am a student at the University of South Alabama in the USA. My teacher's name is Dr. Strange and I take a class called EDM310 where we learn about using the internet and technology to teach students better.
I really enjoyed reading your blog post about your day at the beach. During summer vacation, I like to travel to the beach almost every week! It is one of my favorite things to do. I have never tried to surf, but it sounds like fun. I bet you can't wait for your next visit to the beach, so you can get back on the board and try again. Good Luck!
Hi Asena
ReplyDeleteYes our church did go to the beach but it was to bad that I didn't go because my little cousin's and sisters wanted to go to the pools. I think that was an interesting story I could see an image in my head about you on your surf board.
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Hi Asena
ReplyDeleteIt is me Mary V, that is a great story about the beach. I cant even surf too! I bet you're going to learn how to surf when you grow up.
Bye!
Hi Mary,
ReplyDeletethank you very much for leaving me a comment I really hope that I will get time to look at your blog one day!
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