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Wednesday, April 3, 2013

The Day's Things Were Disappearing (Writing Sample)



On a really cold and windy day my mum and I went shopping. We went into the fruit shop and a strong wind nearly blew everything onto the floor. “WOW” I thought to myself. “What a strong wind” My mum whispered. We were looking for some vegetables for lunch.



I noticed something strange. Things were disappearing, the bananas, the apples even the Broccoli! I looked around me and my mum was gone. “Mum” I yelled. I heard no reply. So I yelled again “Mum!!” I still had no reply. I searched around and tried to find her but I couldn't.



Walking home a little worried, I realised that her car wasn't there. “That's strange” I said to myself. I carried on walking and went inside my house and I saw my dad sitting on the couch. “Have you seen mum?” I asked him.


“No I thought you were with her.” He answered back.

“Yes I was but she suddenly disappeared.”

“Well walk back to the shop and try and find her.” He glanced back.



I walked back to the shops and I found the fruit shop and there she was standing over by the pineapples. “Where did you suddenly disappear to?” I asked her.


“I went to the hair salon just to check out their new hairstyles.” She gently answered back.

“Well you got me worried” I said to her.

“Sorry darling” she said back.

“It’s ok, can we go home now?” I asked.

“Sure” she answered back. So off we went and when we got back home she made us a warm curry to eat. YUM!







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