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Monday, February 28, 2011

Powerful and intense quake

The whole centre of Christchurch was demolished by a powerful and intense quake. Buses were demolished like they were blown up. The cars were destroyed and squashed by rubble. Houses and the cathedral in Christchurch collapsed on people while they were having lunch.
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3 comments:

  1. QuziyahMarch 7, 2011 at 11:00 AM

    Hi Asena,
    What a great earth-quake story.
    I liked the way you used the word demolished.
    It makes your writing interesting.

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  2. TaeshellMarch 7, 2011 at 2:43 PM

    Hi Asena

    I know i have already sent you a comment but Mr Marks said that I have to just by reading your story i noticed that you have put in some pretty good words in your earth-quake in it hope you write more because I am looking forward to be reading another story of yours.
    Keep up the good work Asena.

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  3. AsenaMarch 7, 2011 at 2:51 PM

    Thank you very much for commenting me. I am looking forward to look on your blog and read some more of your writing!
    Thank you!

    From Asena.

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