Scary Snake

Something brushed up against my foot and my surprise turned to horror as I looked down and saw a big scary snake. As the snake slimed up Quziyah she suddenly said “ GET OFF ME “ and she started screaming and running around. Quziyah was so scared that she got sick and tired of running she started to cry.



Quziyah ran as fast as she could but unfortunately it wasn’t fast enough. It caught her and tied its body around her body. It squashed all Raeleen’s bones and ate her  all up. I ran away as fast as I could and just in time I got away from the snake. It was really big and ugly, so that became my most terrifying day. As the days went past I couldn’t stop thinking about that one most scary day.

Looking at the back Quziyah had got eaten. The problem would be that she has to try and get out of the snake. The solution is that she should have a knife with her and then she can cut through the snake. Imagining in the snake is disgusting and sliming and yuck.

I went to go talk to my friend Raeleen. I saw her shopping in the mall. I shouted “Raeleen, I have to talk to you.” She stopped and said “Hi Asena, how are you today?” I replied “Terrified of course!” So I explained to her about that dark scary night and so it went on. Then it was the end. She didn’t believe me so I told her that it was just a made up story.