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Friday, March 22, 2013

Derelict House!


With a heavy heart I walked into the house. As soon as I got inside all I could see was smashed windows, shattered glass, spider webs and darkness. “Should I carry on walking?” I thought to myself.
 So I did. I was getting closer and closer to the stairs and the stairs was covered in spider web.

“Oh my goodness!” I whispered to myself.
I couldn’t stop myself from going upstairs. I carried on walking and as soon as I reached the top of the stairs I suddenly came into a statue and was so shocked. I saw a skeleton
“ARRRRRHHH!” I screamed.

I ran into one of the rooms and I spot something. I went to have a look and it was treasure. The only thing that was strange was that the key was lost. So I searched the whole room and it was lying under a pillow that said Sweet Dreams. So I grabbed it and I went to the treasure and opened it.

As soon as I opened I couldn’t believe it. It was full of gold.
“WOW!” I thought to myself.
“This is amazing” I whispered.
So I struggled taking it down the stairs and took it home. I gave it to my dad and he couldn’t stop staring.
“Must be our lucky day” He said.
“Yeah I’m sure it is” I said back.
After that we ate takeaway’s. DELICOUS!

2 comments:

  1. Hi Asena,
    that must have been scary. I wouldn't go in there, if its the last thing I do! Anyway your story was really good. Keep up the great work.

    Mary V

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    1. Thank you very much Mary.V!

      I hope to see some of your post's. :)

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